Introduction – repetition with should be or will be used
Strategies – the analytical framework is part of this section, so I don’t understand why you have got the conclusion before the framework (it should be after).
Strategies – is not about a respectful community but about classroom situational language. Using the target language as often as possible.
Section 2 constructivism -
Why do you have a separate conclusion for behaviourism and constructivism?
I want you to create one main conclusion at the end of this essay and very short (2-3) sentences conclusion of the individuals sections – stating what has been discussed and what will be discussed in the next section)
Section 3 behaviourism – short by another 250 words. Why did you not include any of the sources I wanted you to do the research on? I wanted you to include 2-3 further paragraphs based on the research (references at the end of behaviourism section) of references. So basically the further 2-3 paragraphs need to be very critical.