Explain why your alternative word would be more precise, concise, accurate, or clear in each instance. Discuss word replacements and make additional recommendations in reply posts.

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Review the student paper “The Purpose of Government” by Anon A. Muss (found in the Discussion Board Instructions). Identify 10 instances in which Mr. Muss could have used a different word to be more precise, concise, accurate, or clear. Explain why your alternative word would be more precise, concise, accurate, or clear in each instance. Discuss word replacements and make additional recommendations in reply posts. 

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Choice of words Name: Course: Instructor: Date: Having read the essay The Purpose of Government by Anon A. Muss I identified a number of incorrect word usage cases. By incorrect word usage cases I mean the cases where the writer could have chosen a better word or phrase in order to make the paper sound more concise and clear. Here are several examples with my explanations. In the second sentence of the first paragraph, the writer should use the word, ineffective, rather than the phrase, not be affective. This reduces the number of words used in the sentence, which are counterproductive and also brings better accuracy to what the writer is passing across. Moreover, affective, does not relate to productivity,

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